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jst undrstnd...just understand by ~lawd:iconlawd:

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cn u er m screm      can you hear me scream    
on dis day of morn'n      on this day of mourning
drknes al'rond      darkness all around
cn ne1 er m screm'n      can anyone hear me screaming
y cnt u tl m      why can't you tell me
y cnt u hlp m      why can't you help me
al i wnt s 2 b hpy      all i want is to be happy
its rd 2 say      it's hard to say
wots go'n on n m ead      whats going on in my head
imgs cum'n n2 m mnd      images coming into me mind
blud evrywer      blood everywhere
payn nd screm'n      pain and screaming
drv'n m mad      driving me mad
mk'n m do tings      making me do things
4c'n m 2 kl      forcing me to kill
2 rayp      to rape
2 fed on m viktims      to feed on me victims
da gilt mks it wers      the guilt makes it worse
nd sumtim's da lak o' it      and sometimes the lack of it
im go'n nsan      i'm going insane
bt i thk u 4 lisn'n      but i thank you for listening
4 nw i mst lev      for now i must leave
u r a tru frnd      you are a true friend
srry bout ur ead      sorry about your head
ur nu gawd      your new god
stumpi      stumpy
©2006-2009 ~lawd
:iconlawd:

Author's Comments

right hears a note on the layout

poem translation of said poem

unfortuneatly the translation was done after not at the same time

for all the grammer geeks yes i have seen this comic on vg cats [link]

the actual poem is about well i'l post what its about below the poem

i don't want to spoil it

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:icondutch-assassin:
~Dutch-Assassin Mar 13, 2006, 3:09:14 AM
that was random but cool

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一個小作物，為男一巨愚蠢人樣
:iconlawd:
~lawd Mar 13, 2006, 3:12:02 AM
its about a paranoid scitzophrenic person with marginly atrocious english skills

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brought to you via the darkest part of my twisted mind

*now in colour*
:iconlawd:
~lawd Mar 13, 2006, 3:13:00 AM
yeah thanks for commenting dude you reminded me that i hadn't put what it was about on there

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brought to you via the darkest part of my twisted mind

*now in colour*
:icondutch-assassin:
~Dutch-Assassin Mar 13, 2006, 3:14:34 AM
lol

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一個小作物，為男一巨愚蠢人樣
:iconlawd:
~lawd Mar 13, 2006, 3:17:09 AM
so thanks dude

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brought to you via the darkest part of my twisted mind

*now in colour*
:icondutch-assassin:
~Dutch-Assassin Mar 13, 2006, 3:24:23 AM
no prob why did you do it?

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一個小作物，為男一巨愚蠢人樣
:iconlawd:
~lawd Mar 14, 2006, 2:35:59 AM
i was bored

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brought to you via the darkest part of my twisted mind

*now in colour*
:icondutch-assassin:
~Dutch-Assassin Mar 14, 2006, 4:42:50 AM
aaa ok then

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一個小作物，為男一巨愚蠢人樣
:iconlawd:
~lawd Mar 14, 2006, 10:37:04 AM
yup it is

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brought to you via the darkest part of my twisted mind

*now in colour*
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